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Eh, just texting out my Oc's. You know how I love rules....

EDIT: I redid mine, because..I R CEATER >:3

Cali.

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[x] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color (((She's a girl so...Calico isn't rare..right?)))

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[X] (if a female) they have large boobs  (((Uhm...no...what ^^; ))

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (((Dosen't it depend...)))

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[x] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[X] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[/] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender  (((I'm sure it's only Koti..)))

[/ ] They have lots of friends/no friends (((What do you consider a lot..)))

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[X] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[X] They are currently in a relationship

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder  (((Nah, she just seems like a ditz sometimes)))

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho (((ASDFJKL!!!)))

[/] They have multiple personalities (((SNWNFUEVUWVU2REUVEFIQWJDIWJ2DI218IQ!!!!!111!!!111one!!!)))

[ ] They are very intelligent (((Average..)))

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal (((......)))

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'  (((?)))

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood   ((( ;;;;3;;;; BLOOD BLOOD BLOOOOOOOOOEEEED))

[/] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[/] They are very lively/happy

[/] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly (((okay...this is it...this is frikken like 20 points now.)))

[ ] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (((Heehee, oh Thank Dejango~! <3)))

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[/] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 10 (WAHT NOW BISH?)

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight 

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ /] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: .5

Final score: 9.5

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< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

 

 

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

FFFFFFFFFFFF-OH YES (still oh yes ;D )

 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu




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June 25, 2011 at 1:17 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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Dakota

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ /] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[X] (if a female) they have large boobs (((No need to be mean here...^^')))

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (((meh, I can't explain this...)))

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[/] They are very attractive to the same gender

[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends (((Not many she would consider to be her friends.)))

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[/] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[/] They are currently in a relationship ((( it's complicated..)))

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. (((ffffff-she dosen't even belive this shizz)))

[ ] They have a mental disorder 

[/] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ ] They are very intelligent

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'  (((Is slutty a label...:$)))

[x] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy (((Meh...)))

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ ] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 6 (HAHA FUCK YOU MEME LOOK WHO'S LAUGHING NOW ;D)

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[x] They have a short temper

[x] They enjoy bullying others

[x] They do not care much about others

[x] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: 4 ((FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF))

 

Final score: 2 ((MEME, YOU ARE A BISH.))

--

< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

........she's not that boring is she D,:

 

 

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu


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June 25, 2011 at 1:34 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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Dejango

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[x] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

 

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs

 

[x] (if a male) they are very muscular (((?)))

[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (((uh..)))

 

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

 

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[/] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[x] They have lots of friends/no friends (((........I've met him...NO RLY)))

 

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[x] They are currently in a relationship

 

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

 

[ ] They have a mental disorder 

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ ] They are very intelligent

 

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[/] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

 

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

 

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy

 

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[x] They are very patient

[/] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

 

[ ] They have amnesia

 

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 8.5

 

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[/] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: .5

 

 

Final score: 8

 

--

< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


 

 

 

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!

 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

 


--


June 25, 2011 at 2:02 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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Bruno

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[/] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

 

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs

 

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

 

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

 

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. 

 

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender 

[/ ] They have lots of friends/no friends

 

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[/] They are currently in a relationship

[X] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder 

 

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

 

[ ] They have multiple personalities

 

[X] They are very intelligent

 

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal (((......)))

 

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

 

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

 

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood  

 

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[/] They are very lively/happy

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

 

[X] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

 

[ ] They have amnesia

 

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 5.5

 

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight 

 

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ /] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: 0

 

Final score: 5.5

 

--

< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

 

 .....

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


 

 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

 

 

 

 

 

 

--

"Can I say I love you?" "Please don't" "And you love me too?' "It's nothing you can prove." "Say you do!" "I don't!" "You will!" "I wont!" "As far as you know........"  ".....You're no help."  "What if my heart belongs to someone else?" "I don't belive you." "Good, cuz' it's not true............and by the way I love you too."  <3

Bruno x Koti

 

June 25, 2011 at 1:17 PM Edit Delete Flag Quote & Reply

Cali-cat Administrator

Posts: 380 Dakota

 

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ ] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

 

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[X] (if a female) they have large boobs (((No need to be mean here...^^')))

 

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (((meh, I can't explain this...)))

 

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

 

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends (((Not many she would consider to be her friends.)))

 

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[/] They are currently in a relationship ((( it's complecated..)))

 

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem. (((ffffff-she dosen't even belive this shizz)))

 

[ ] They have a mental disorder 

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ ] They are very intelligent

 

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'  (((Is slutty a label...:$)))

 

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

 

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy (((Meh...)))

 

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ ] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

 

[ ] They have amnesia

 

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 2

 

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[ ] They smoke

[x] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[x] They have a short temper

[x] They enjoy bullying others

[x] They do not care much about others

[x] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: 4

 

 

Final score: -2 (WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK IS THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111!!!!!!!!1111ONE ONe111!!!!!!!)

 

--

< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

........she's not that boring is she D,:

 

 

 

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!

 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

 

 

--

"Can I say I love you?" "Please don't" "And you love me too?' "It's nothing you can prove." "Say you do!" "I don't!" "You will!" "I wont!" "As far as you know........"  ".....You're no help."  "What if my heart belongs to someone else?" "I don't belive you." "Good, cuz' it's not true............and by the way I love you too."  <3

Bruno x Koti

 

June 25, 2011 at 1:34 PM Edit Delete Flag Quote & Reply

Cali-cat Administrator

Posts: 380 Dejango

 

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[x] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

 

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs

 

 

[/] (if a male) they are very muscular (((?)))

 

[/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (((uh..)))

 

 

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

 

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[x] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[/] They have lots of friends/no friends (((........I've met him...)))

 

 

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[x] They are currently in a relationship

 

 

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

 

 

[ ] They have a mental disorder 

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ ] They are very intelligent

 

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[/] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

 

 

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

 

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy

 

 

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ ] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

 

[ ] They have amnesia

 

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 5

 

 

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[x] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[/] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: 1.5

 

 

 

Final score: 3.5

 

 

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< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

FUCK THIS MEM

 

 

 

 

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!

 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

 

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Lock

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ x] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs

[ /] (if a male) they are very muscular

[/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ x] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ x] They ran away from home (((he did at age 6.... never saw his parents again)))

[ x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[/ ] They have lots of friends/no friends

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[ ] They are currently in a relationship (((really confusing, which time again? lol)))

[ x] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ x] They have multiple personalities

[ x] They are very intelligent

[ /] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ x] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ /] They are very patient (((it depends)))

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 12.5

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ /] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: .5

Final score: 12

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< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

FFFFFFFFFFFF-OH YES

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

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June 25, 2011 at 2:17 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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Posts: 840

Jenna

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ ] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[x] (if a female) they have large boobs

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[ x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ x] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ x] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[/] They are very attractive to the same gender(Doesnt it depend..?)

[ x] They have lots of friends/no friends

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[ ] They are currently in a relationship

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ x] They have multiple personalities

[ ] They are very intelligent

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy

[ x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ ] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 8.5

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[/] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ /] They do not care much about others

[ /] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: 1.5

Final score: 7

--

< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

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June 25, 2011 at 2:26 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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Posts: 840

Liz

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ ] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ /] (if a female) they have large boobs

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[ x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[X] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ x] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[ x] They have lots of friends/no friends (((What do you consider a lot..)))

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[X] They are currently in a relationship

[ x] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ x] They have multiple personalities

[ x] They are very intelligent

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ x] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[/] They are very lively/happy

[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ /] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 15.5

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ x] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: 1

Final score: 14.5

--

< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

 

 

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

FFFFFFFFFFFF-OH YES

 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

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June 25, 2011 at 5:47 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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Doing this 4 ryan, dont feel like logging out lol

Ricardo

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ x] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[ ] They are physically strong.

[ x] They have a rare hair/fur color

[ x] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ x] This happens to be red

[ x] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[X] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ x] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ x] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ x] They are very attractive to the same gender 

[ x] They have lots of friends/no friends

[ x] They are emo/cutesy

[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[ x] They are currently in a relationship

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ x] They have an emotional disorder

[ x] They struggle to stay sane

[ x] They are a psycho

[ x] They have multiple personalities 

[ ] They are very intelligent

[ x] They have hallucinations

[ x] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ x] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ /] Their soul is not the same as them

[ x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ /] They have a rare/unusual name

[ x] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. (december 21)

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ x] They are connected with a certain element

[ x] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ x] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ x] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ x] They are from a different country to where they live

[ x] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy

[ x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ ] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ x] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 36.5 o.O 

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[ x] They smoke

[ x] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ x] They are addicted to drugs

[ x] They have a short temper

[ x] They enjoy bullying others

[ x] They do not care much about others

[ x] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: 7

Final score: 29.5

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< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

 

 

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

FFFFFFFFFFFF-OH YES

 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

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June 25, 2011 at 7:19 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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Posts: 11

Mia

[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[/] They are physically strong.

[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color

 

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[x ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal (( I wish I was like Kenny >> ))

[x ] (if a female) they have large boobs

 

[] (if a male) they are very muscular

[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. ((Sure.))

 

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

 

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[] They have lost one/both of their parents

[ ] They ran away from home

[ x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[x ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[x] They have lots of friends/no friends

 

[ /] They are emo/cutesy (( People THINK she is . ))

[ x] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[x] They are currently in a relationship

 

[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.

 

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ x] They are very intelligent

 

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul (( A SUPERDUPERAWESOMECARINGONE Does that count ? ))

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ x] They always dress like a certain 'label' (( LIKEABOSS )) 

 

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

 

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[x ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood (( I WISH '3' ))

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[x ] They are very lively/happy

 

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[x] They are very patient

[] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[x ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

 

[ ] They have amnesia

 

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ x] They have insomnia

 

Overall points: 16

 

 

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

 

[x ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[/] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ x] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

 

Point Reductions: 2.5

 

 

Final score:  13.5

 

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< 5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

 

 

 

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

It's too close >> .

 

 

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

 

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

August 4, 2011 at 2:47 AM Flag Quote & Reply

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[ ] They are possessed by an angel

[ ] They are possessed by a demon

[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie

[  ] They are physically strong.

[x] They have a rare hair/fur color

[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color

[ ] This happens to be red

[ ] Their eyes change color

[ ] They have wings

[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift

[ ] They are immortal

[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs

[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular

[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc

[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc

[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers

[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet

[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers

[ ] They are a healer

[ x] They are from a very rich/royal family

[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background

[ x] They have lost one/both of their parents

[  ] They ran away from home

[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.

[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death

[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature

[ ] They never knew their parents

[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child

[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender

[x ] They have lots of friends/no friends

[ ] They are emo/cutesy

[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.

[ ] They are currently in a relationship

[x] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'Iwould rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend''Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn'thesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC hasthese beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preachthem to others, then we have a problem.

[ ] They have a mental disorder

[ ] They have an emotional disorder

[ ] They struggle to stay sane

[ ] They are a psycho

[ ] They have multiple personalities

[ x] They are very intelligent

[ ] They have hallucinations

[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet

[ ] They have a guardian spirit

[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul

[ ] Their soul is not the same as them

[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts

[ ] Some part of their body glows

[ ] They have a rare/unusual name

[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age

[ ] They are connected with a certain element

[ ] They are connected with a certain animal

[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'

[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga

[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood

[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared

[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives

[ ] They are hiding from someone/something

[ ] They have a rare blood type

[ ] They cry blood

[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown

[ ] They are from a different country to where they live

[ ] They are very mysterious/dark

[ ] They are very lively/happy

[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly

[ x] They are very patient

[ ] They are from a long line of (Insert profession/Power here: )

[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

[ ] They have amnesia

[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition

[ ] They have a curse upon them

[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy

[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 8

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke

[ ] They are an alcoholic

[ ] They are overweight

[ ] They are addicted to drugs

[ ] They have a short temper

[ ] They enjoy bullying others

[ ] They do not care much about others

[ ] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: 0

Final score: 8

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< 5 Anti-Sue

Yourcharacter may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend,but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spicethem up' a bit ^^

6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scoredaround here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced andinteresting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this categorymay be a bit too much though.

Yay! ^^

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

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August 5, 2011 at 7:39 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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